Six Sentence Sunday: Is it a Meteor?

by | J Oct, 2012 | 4 comments

Today’s six sentences are from Marlee’s POV. She’s out collecting firewood, when she realises something is wrong.

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Far off in the distance, she heard it again. Screams. Something was horribly wrong. Abandoning the wheelbarrow, she turned to run back to the settlement. A loud boom sounded overhead, and she ducked.

A large object burned through the sky above her.

4 Comments

  1. Karen Michelle Nutt
    Karen Michelle Nutt on October 22, 2012 at 1:02 am

    I sense danger and the urgency to find out what’s happening. Great six!

  2. Sandra Sookoo
    Sandra Sookoo on October 22, 2012 at 1:04 am

    Nice jumping in with conflict. đŸ™‚

  3. Susanna Fraser
    Susanna Fraser on October 22, 2012 at 2:07 am

    Great, action-packed six!

  4. gayleramage
    gayleramage on October 22, 2012 at 6:07 pm

    Oh heck, what’s happening here?? Great 6.